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holydiver97595
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PostSubject: It's been long enough now...   It's been long enough now... Icon_minitimeThu Jun 02, 2011 10:17 pm

http://soundcloud.com/demonous

For those of you who haven't been able to hear my band, but are sick of me talking about it, here y'all are! Enjoy!

Also, and comments/criticisms are much appreciated!
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PostSubject: Re: It's been long enough now...   It's been long enough now... Icon_minitimeThu Jun 02, 2011 10:22 pm

Is this a joke band? Because it sounds like a joke band.
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PostSubject: Re: It's been long enough now...   It's been long enough now... Icon_minitimeThu Jun 02, 2011 10:52 pm

Pssh, naw, we're real. Silly name, real band Razz

Edit: wait, did you mean the band as a group sounds like a joke, or the music, because if it's the latter, ouch Sad
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PostSubject: Re: It's been long enough now...   It's been long enough now... Icon_minitimeThu Jun 02, 2011 11:01 pm

It's definitely not the worst thing I've ever heard. And that's a complement.
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PostSubject: Re: It's been long enough now...   It's been long enough now... Icon_minitimeThu Jun 02, 2011 11:06 pm

Schbopo wrote:
It's definitely not the worst thing I've ever heard. And that's a complement.

Why thank you! Very Happy
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the lead singer reminds me of that guy in the B-52's.

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GOOD LUCK MAN, KEEP PRACTICING
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mc666 wrote:
the lead singer reminds me of that guy in the B-52's.

Yours truly, and thank you.

And we will, powermacho! It's the only way to get better!
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PostSubject: Re: It's been long enough now...   It's been long enough now... Icon_minitimeThu Jun 02, 2011 11:27 pm

holydiver97595 wrote:
mc666 wrote:
the lead singer reminds me of that guy in the B-52's.

Yours truly, and thank you.

And we will, powermacho! It's the only way to get better!
I do like the singer voice and the guitar players. what instrument you play?
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PostSubject: Re: It's been long enough now...   It's been long enough now... Icon_minitimeThu Jun 02, 2011 11:30 pm

powermacho wrote:
holydiver97595 wrote:
mc666 wrote:
the lead singer reminds me of that guy in the B-52's.

Yours truly, and thank you.

And we will, powermacho! It's the only way to get better!
I do like the singer voice and the guitar players. what instrument you play?

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I like the gee-tar playing.
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PostSubject: Re: It's been long enough now...   It's been long enough now... Icon_minitimeFri Jun 03, 2011 12:26 am

Good work!

You're better then my band Razz
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PostSubject: Re: It's been long enough now...   It's been long enough now... Icon_minitimeFri Jun 03, 2011 1:26 am

Your vocals would be great in those monster-mash type music, and I mean it in a good way.
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PostSubject: Re: It's been long enough now...   It's been long enough now... Icon_minitimeFri Jun 03, 2011 10:14 am

The singing is a mixture of B52's and Richard Cheese.
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PostSubject: Re: It's been long enough now...   It's been long enough now... Icon_minitimeFri Jun 03, 2011 12:47 pm

Thank you all for the praise! Any constructive criticism on how we could make it better?
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holydiver97595 wrote:
Thank you all for the praise! Any constructive criticism on how we could make it better?

Mine wasn't praise.

Constructive criticism? Your lyrics rhyme, that's a start. Really, the fancy man-light in the loafers delivery of the vocals really underminds any progress you're making now. Either bury them in the mix or sound more aggressive. My 2 cents.
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PostSubject: Re: It's been long enough now...   It's been long enough now... Icon_minitimeFri Jun 03, 2011 1:31 pm

Theres definitely potential there.My constructive criticism would be to find a different vocal approach.The way you just talk the lyrics out sounds really annoying.Try singing or go for a more aggressive thrash type approach.Keep practicing and good luck to you guys.
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PostSubject: Re: It's been long enough now...   It's been long enough now... Icon_minitimeFri Jun 03, 2011 2:27 pm

Sounds fine to me.

If you go and listen to ANY 80's punk band (the Repo Man soundtrack immediately comes to mind), your band would fit right in...

I like it, send me a CD.
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SpectreFate wrote:
Constructive criticism? Your lyrics rhyme, that's a start. Really, the fancy man-light in the loafers delivery of the vocals really underminds any progress you're making now. Either bury them in the mix or sound more aggressive. My 2 cents.


Thrasher73 wrote:
Theres definitely potential there.My constructive criticism would be to find a different vocal approach.The way you just talk the lyrics out sounds really annoying.Try singing or go for a more aggressive thrash type approach.Keep practicing and good luck to you guys.

I see what you're saying, and I agree with you -- I really am not a fan of how I sing these songs. I'd rather them sound like the earlier demo (found here), but it was pretty hard on my voice. I'm looking to move into vocals more like Cryonic Temple, and I'm glad y'all agree that I need to switch Razz

Oh, and thanks Martinsane! Much appreciated Smile
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PostSubject: Re: It's been long enough now...   It's been long enough now... Icon_minitimeSun Jun 05, 2011 1:32 pm

I can hear the B-52 style voxs

I like it definitly need to polish the sound a bit but I like what I hear
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PostSubject: Re: It's been long enough now...   It's been long enough now... Icon_minitimeSun Jun 05, 2011 4:12 pm

Thanks, Addy! This is our first recording that we released to the public, so we're working on getting the sound better before a full-length.
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martinsane wrote:
Sounds fine to me.

If you go and listen to ANY 80's punk band (the Repo Man soundtrack immediately comes to mind), your band would fit right in...

I like it, send me a CD.
that's what I was thinking about, maybe doing some hardcore punk stuff
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mc666 wrote:
the lead singer reminds me of that guy in the B-52's.

They should do a cover of "Love Shack".
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PostSubject: Re: It's been long enough now...   It's been long enough now... Icon_minitimeMon Jun 06, 2011 6:31 am


Well, the vocals are an aquired taste, but not necessarily something you should change all the much, maybe sing a bit more - the real issue, to me, is the mix - the vocals are WAY too up front, while the rest of the instrument sound like their miles away - the guitars should be up front, with the vocals - I realize these are just demo's, and probably not the way you want them to sound, but that's the biggest issue anyway, at least to me it is.
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Mglaffas81 wrote:

Well, the vocals are an aquired taste, but not necessarily something you should change all the much, maybe sing a bit more - the real issue, to me, is the mix - the vocals are WAY too up front, while the rest of the instrument sound like their miles away - the guitars should be up front, with the vocals - I realize these are just demo's, and probably not the way you want them to sound, but that's the biggest issue anyway, at least to me it is.

I agree, we need to work on the mix some. When we were mixing it the first time through, I think we turned down the guitars too much (because we thought it'd be loud enough since there are 2 guitarists). However, at some parts I can barely hear the second guitar, which is a problem. Thanks for the suggestions, Mglaffas!


And TroubleZone, Love Shack would be fun xD
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