I NEED YOUR OPINION GUYS!!!

Dinky Do Number of posts : 4830 Age : 43

I am planning on doing a little recording so I can send a song to a local radio station that plays musicians music. I have a few originals worked out and i need some feedback on which one would be a good pick.
Music here..

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/DeadIdentity81/music/all/play473705

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