This isn't bad at all. The only issue I have with it is that it doesn't stand out from the pack much in the field of NWOTHM. If I get too much of one style, it starts to all blend together. But that's just me.
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I used to be with it, but then they changed what "it" was. Now what I'm with isn't it, and what's it seems weird and scary to me, and it'll happen to you, too.