This is just a bit too "garage-y" for me. Just too "sloppy" or something.
Reminds me of a sleaze version of Monster Magnet too.
Keep 'em comin' though; I'm always willing to give stuff like this a shot.
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"The cat is the most ruthless, most terrifying of animals." - Spock in the "Catspaw" episode of ToS Season 2.